Thank you dtim

Thank you dtim for helping me do my grammar editing :). I fixed the grammar errors.

Sorry guys for having such a bad grammar :o


  1. The large majority of the grammar mistakes are sort of... nitpicky things that don't cause problems understanding the story.

    I wish I could volunteer as an editor but my schedule is really random right now and some weeks I have no free time whatsoever. I'll continue reading through the chapters and offering corrections, though. :)

    Off to read chapter 11...

    1. it seems that I was putting was instead of were too often and a bit of typo here and there.